ENC 1102 "Teacher Comments"

Feedback, in general is extremely helpful, i think. When in the process of writing a rough draft, it is always valuable to get anothers' opinion as well as advice on improvements. I have not always been a great writer and any advice i get is of major importance to my final paper. The comments you have given throughtout my paper was extremely helpful. I did not see the minor mistakes i had made previously and get a better idea of what i overlooked or did not fully explain. In addition i feel that peer reviews are also a great aid in helping to make the transition of our rough drafts to final drafts. I have improved such things as grammar, sentence structure, and my own personal thought involving the overall paper. As far as my overall final draft, i plan on revising a lot. From reviewing the comments i better understood that in a research paper, i need to use more of my own words followed by backing up some resources. So in my final paper i will be focusing more on my views towards the cloning debate, as well as rewriting a few paragraphs in order to make a better progression of my paper. Also, grammatical errors will be looked and fixed, to better aid the transition and flow of my paper. I have alot of good resources for my paper, however i will be needing an opposing source to backup my opinion and views etc. This has been a great experience of first hand writing a research paper.